I wrote this raw version in an hour. Enjoy!
The Stranger Dream
By Joshua A. Spotts (grateful/stranded/dream)
Albert
Mersault was a man of the darkness. His shadow was never seen. In the sunlight
everything seemed as an image in a broken mirror. He clung to the thick
darkness of the night, cowering in the darkness of the earth in the day. He
walked silently with footsteps softer than a cat’s. He was master of the night.
No one heard or saw him. He moved and did as he pleased until they arrived.
The gas
lamps were bearable. In fact, Albert liked them. They flickered and were
familiar. They assisted him when the moon and the stars cut through the night
ceiling for he hid in the shadows they caused. Those shadows were lighter and
then darker, ever in a constant state of change. He enjoyed the effect this
produced. If anyone glimpsed him there they would only see an illusion. They
would dismiss his presence to the deception of their own eyes. This was all before they came.
They cut
through his home. That wonderful darkness he embraced and which had embraced
him. It was no longer safe. Those horrid beams of brilliant illumination bit
through all he held dear. A spear of pure hate caught him full in the chest. He
blinked at the dazzling light for a moment before he heard their voices. They
had found him. Those silver badged varmints with their beams of light.
Albert ran.
He ran with all the purpose in him. He scaled a nearby fire escape. It didn’t
creak and groan beneath his light weight. At first, he thought they wouldn’t
hear him and they didn’t. The lights, they found him. He winced in their cruel
illumination. He felt utterly naked, even swathed in dark robes like he was.
“Climb,
boys, we have him now! Circle ‘round.”
The pursued
player of the shadows fled across rooftops and the men with their illuminating
beams chased after. Hate swelled in his chest, combining with his fear of the
light. He glimpsed out across the skyline and glanced the reddening cloud. He
cursed the light and dived through an open window. He moved silently through
the room. A sleeping child rolled over in the corner. Down the hall, he slid
down a banister and out the front door. As he left the building he heard the
crash of furniture, curses of men, and the crying of the frightened child, then
there were hands on him. Those long-fingered claws drug him to the ground as
the sun rose in the sky. Albert Mersault screamed his hatred to the world.
“He’s a
thing of passion, be cautious.”
“I think I
can handle myself, captain.”
Albert
huddled in a shadow behind one of the parapets. A man dressed as a prince
emerged unto the tower roof. He held a sword in one hand and a club in the
other. Albert hissed at him. The man towered over Albert. “Tell me what you
heard.”
Albert
Mersault shrunk deeper into the shadow, fearing the light. A heavy, gloved hand
pulled him out into the center of the tower. The hand slapped him to the left
then backhanded him to the right. Blood trickled down Albert’s chin. He held
his eyes closed. He sat in a humiliated, pathetic heap at the man’s feet. The
club came down and he remained motionless, sprawled out upon the tower top, fully
exposed to the hated light. “Tell me, fool. Or I will kill you like I killed
your family.”
“I do not
fear death.”
“Then live
an eternity in the light,” the man stormed off the roof, his crooked nose held
high. Albert chuckled, had he actually offended the man’s pride? Two men with
the silver badges emerged unto the roof. They had clippers and needles and
thread. They laughed as they sowed Albert’s eyelids to his eyebrows. His entire
world shattered like an image in a mirror. He saw the pyramid symbol on the
shining badges and cursed under his breath as they beat him with rods. He was
stranded on that tower all day and the sun burnt his eyes out.
Louie
Mersault awoke with a start. What a horrible dream. He leapt out of bed and
stared around. The red numbers on his alarm clock read 3:23. They gleamed
through the darkness. He could still see! Louie sighed. That dream had been so
real. The light turned on and there, in the doorway, stood a tall man with a
shining badge. The pyramid and eye boldly declared who the man was. The Illuminati
had finally come for him. The man spoke, his voice like tires on gravel, “what
did he hear?”
I thought you were going to go with the "It was all a dream" thing, and I was dismally disappointed in you. Now i'm just intrigued! You can't stop there! I'm dying to know what happens next. It seems that in this story Light is the enemy, and Darkness good, which is such a twist on the norm... I like it. Seriously, I think you need to continue this story.
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Thank you, I am considering making it a novel, but I already have a few in the works. I purposefully avoided "it was all a dream." My singular goal here was to be entirely original. It turns out I was shockingly so.
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